Saturday, August 4, 2007

SOUL

I have been to life,I have been to death
Still from both of those have no regrets
I wanted a truimphant self
I got a beleaguered soul
I could manage to keep my face in veil
But wounded conscience left unconsoled.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

very well said

Deepen Thakkar said...

hi dear anonymous,
thanks for your comment ,it is the first comment i have received over here,it would have been great if you had got your name.still thanks.

Shawn said...

Well said.

Much of your work is deeply religious and introspective. I've enjoyed it thoroughly.

I wish you well; so too this blog.

Deepen Thakkar said...

dear shawn,
thanks for dropping by..

Thanks for those words of soothing encouragement.Yep I am quite introspective by nature..
I think me as well as my blog require some wishes and visitors,me wishes and the blog visitors...